Essay 2: McLuhan Analysis
English 101 Fall 2003
College Writing


(Bring typed draft to class 9/29)

Overview: As the basis for this two to three-page essay, you will explore the relevance of a key McLuhan concept to the 2003 mediascape in which you live. You should be prepared to take a position on the degree of McLuhan's applicability, both by carefully presenting some aspect of his theory and by thoroughly examining a contemporary example. I suggest that you work with a subsection of the book and identify a clear concept, perhaps one for which McLuhan coins a special term.

Hint: A strong essay will show comprehension of McLuhan and reflection on the contemporary world.

Process:

  1. Prewriting
      1. Identify concept in McLuhan's The Medium is the Massage: An Inventory of Effects that interests you and that seems like a significant aspect of his theory.
      2. Determine the section of the book in which it is primarily treated (ideally between two and ten pages).
      3. Take notes on these pages: summarize content, quote key passages, describe the visual dimensions.
      4. Define the concept--in McLuhan's words, then in your own terms.
      5. Consider whether the subsection simply asserts the concept or gives evidence; if there is evidence, evaluate and describe the kind given.
  2. Planning
      1. Review the raw material you have generated above and brainstorm a list of connections with the contemporary world.
      2. Freewrite a page or two about whether and how McLuhan's concept applies to the contemporary situation of your choice.
      3. Draft a working introduction that identifies the concept, reveals your position as to its applicability, and gives a preview of the major points to follow.
      4. Create a planning document. (This could be a formal outline, a cluster chart, or a simple list); it should include at least two quotations from McLuhan.
      5. Give yourself a working title.
  3. Drafting
      1. With your materials all accessible, begin drafting.
      2. If you draft by hand, type your rough draft and bring it to class for peer critique.

 

[Be attentive to the relevance of "definitions" and kinds of "evidence" in this essay; you should use the overview in the class text (Barnet, Critical) to focus on the terms and evidence used by McLuhan; and you should bolster your own argument with appropriate kinds of definitions and evidence. Students who submit evidence of fully following the process above will receive a 5% bonus on this paper.]

 
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